Try to write a poem

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  1. Codeslamer

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    What bits are meant to rhyme? I thought it was just the last words on the 2nd and 4th line.
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    Don't laugh at me! I've tried to write some poem like stuff here, believe me. I'm just really terrible at it
     
  2. overdrive5

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    Your thoughts are correct (2nd and 4th line rhyme), @kaiser imnop might've tried to add a fifth line.

    You can write poems that don't rhyme, I've written some myself.
     
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  3. Copunit12

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  4. overdrive5

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    Roses are red
    that forehead is big
    I think Jack should really
    buy a new wig.
     
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  5. missionsystem

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    Roses are red,
    violets are blue,
    NANI?
    KANSEI DORIFTO?
     
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  6. Nathan24™

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    Ferraris are red
    Buggatis are blue
    Inertia and Direct_UA where are you
    You got beaned
     
  7. 98crownvic

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    the Prius is great
    the aztek gets hate
    the ford pinto will make you late

    in a figurative sense
     
  8. vmlinuz

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    Roses are red,
    net neutrality was nice.
    Only $25.99 to unlock the rest of this meme.
    I think that's a fair price.
     
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  9. DuneWulff

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    Birb - A Haiku by DuneWulff

    A small birb's song - tweet,
    Shifting, ruffle of feathers,
    Give birb the seed plz.​
     
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  10. llӇƳЄƝƛԼƠƦƊll

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    Roses are red
    Violets are violet not blue
    Ok no I'm not gonna make one of those
     
  11. Alewyx

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    Roses are red,
    Voilots are blue,
    I love BeamNG,
    And So do you.
     
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  12. overdrive5

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    Thanks for playing along.
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    Roses are red
    voilots don't exist
    but i'll forgive that spelling
    it can be easily missed.
     
  13. missionsystem

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    prasus are red,
    sunbursts are blue,
    and both of them go
    BRAAAAAAPSTUTUTUTU
     
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  14. WolfieJones

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    Roses are red
    Giga is blue
    Who bumped the thread
    Bruckell Road Cruiser, boo!
     
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  15. Snikle

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    Roses are Red
    Puce stuff is puce
    I wish I were dead
    'Cause you are a douche.
     
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  16. workclock1©

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    Grass is Green

    concrete is Gray (in some cases)

    Harambe was shot

    And Rick Harrison bought him

    (I can do better, just making some random one i came up with..)
     
  17. overdrive5

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    Roses are red
    I really hope you can
    Harambe was shot?
    Damn.
     
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  18. JCX034

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    Here is my poetry:

    From the downhill at Irohazaka,
    To the uphill at Hakone,
    I am the real lone wolf,
    The Ghost of Toge from Osaka.

    (Even though it is total s*** but that's my poetry. I did put the Initial D reference. Maybe someone like this. BTW that's your taste when come to poetry things.)
     
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  19. Carlover0529

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    I actually write a lot of poetry in my free time and so I'm actually going to post some of my serious ones.
    cologneandsmoke.jpg Blondie.jpg AnatomyofaRose.jpg
     
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  20. Fuzzwad

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    Communism re-established.
    That's my goal.
    Go fish.
    Shoal.






    Good job kiddo I'm proud of you.
     
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