I need your opinion :)

Discussion in 'Videos, Screenshots and other Artwork' started by SkritCraft, Jun 17, 2016.

  1. SkritCraft

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    I would just like to know your opinion and if you have any suggestions, just tell me.





     
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  2. Aboroath

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    Quality. 30 seconds of 'don't forget to like and subscribe' is a bit much. 5-10 seconds of that would suffice.
     
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  3. mms

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    same as what @Aboroath said. that was really good.
     
  4. SkritCraft

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    Made a new video. Made the Outro a little bit shorter. I'm trying to find new styles of changing the camera perspective.
     
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  5. torsion

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    Good work - especially considering how extremely limited the machinima tools in BeamNG.drive currently are! I agree with Aboroath and mms above. I still think that your outro is excessively long considering the tiny amounts of content you are including in the video. In your most recent video (post #4) the outro consumes over 25% of a sub-one-minute video! Generally speaking a 14 second YouTube outro might not be considered excessive - the real issue is that the actual content is very brief. The ETK Sedan video is literally 50/50 at 22s each for the content and the outro! I personally wouldn't post a <20s video positioned as actual 'produced' content, althought I do frequently post very brief videos as demos of an action, problem, etc - and why would a demo of something like that have an outro? Doesn't make sense to me.

    I think this is the trick: I don't really see any kind of storytelling happening in the video, which would make it hard to have a significantly long clip not be boring. If you don't have any ideas maybe it would be worthwhile to team up with someone else? The other person could handle concepts, storytelling/plot, and video direction. You could handle grip work, camera operations, and production - which you clearly excel at! Granted that you'd have share credit for something where you do all of the most technical work... but half of something is better than all of nothing IMO.

    I'm definitely looking forward to more stuff with your hand in it.
     
  6. Bernd

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    They do look great :)
     
  7. Snowtato

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    If you take requests, do a video for the Ibishu 200BX "Beast" with Pronobozo music
     
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  8. NinetyNine!

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    wow , i love the style of the camera views , transistions etc. great work!

    as i can't express myself very good in english , i'm gonna keep it short.

    are you interested in making a new varietymod trailer? i have ideas in my mind but don't have time to start a video project atm.
    If you are interested in this , PM me. I'll give you more information then. (Might help to get some subs ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°))

    keep it up! subscribed and hope to see more like this ;)
     
  9. SkritCraft

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    New Video
     
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  10. Snowtato

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    You forgot the "Beast".
     
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