Me Trying To Make A Crash Compilation

This is only two clips for now I will edit post as I do more. Will post YouTube link when I finish it.

EDIT 1: If you have any tips on how I can improve feel free to comment

EDIT 2: made second clip. Thanks for the feedback

 

too long of a wait before the actual crash. And some weird editing, its just ugh. My video is linked below and you can see i only add 5 secs of video before the crash. You dont need fancy editing in crash videos only in cinematic. One of cinematics below, so see the different editing? Crash=simple, Cinematic=complex.

 

I see you where trying for a sort of FrlsErls type of editing, but didn't go so well, I don't see why you looped it again at the end, no need to see the same crash twice, and, just a random 90s Pessima for no real reason, I'd suggest not using cars that won't be a part of the crash or be an extra, it's just kinda too far away to be of much use or effect

 

Thanks I see what you mean.
My inspiration comes more from DragCarTV but I see why you would think FrlsErls

 

UPDATED

 

Yeah, that cut editing style is rather iconic of FrlsErls

 

Nice bro! Definitely an improvement.
You've definitely been inspired by DragcarTV. Even my videos are based off of DragcarTV's videos

 

Thanks man. I've seen some of your videos and I really like them and I can see that you also put a lot of effort into them

 

You did a better job than me ! keep up

 

no problem
Only 18hrs to make the shipping fails video

 

Thanks man!
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Damn that's some dedication although tbh mine has already taken about 2hrs and it only has 2 clips haha