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1. Wow, my theory senses are tingling..... 2. You are maybe the first and only member with a dev rating, I know exactly why, and I think everyone else can agree, man, I wish I had one.... 3. From what I see in the subtitles, English is great
Your English is decent; there aren't any translation errors so far based on the preview/teaser (it looks awesome, by the way ). What irritates me (just a bit) is the usage of punctuations, such as colons and dashes used at the same time to separate the character's name and the dialogue. My suggestion is that you should use only a colon or a dash to do that, but not both. Also, there are two periods/dots instead of three at the end of some sentences. I believe you are trying to use an ellipsis, which is used to show a pause in speech or a sentence trailing off (other than omitting certain words). Look at the example dialogue below (which is taken from the teaser video). Instead of on the video, the fixed dialogue should be I'm being a little picky on this, but please try to use those corrections more often in future videos (I'm assuming that it's a bit too late to make said changes to the subtitles) so that it looks a bit nicer in general. It's only a suggestion though, so don't take it too seriously. That's all I have to say, so thanks for taking some time to read this
Registrations aren't even open for the next episode. Please wait after FrIzErIs releases the bloopers/making of video for season 2, episode 1.
The grill is black. Other than that, looks pretty accurate. Not really, I decided to updated all cars for season two. That's why Hellhound drivers white/black Viper ACR instead of a red one you saw at the end of season finale. Make sure to apply when registration is announced. If you make it, I'll make sure you Mustang plows into a crowd. (sorry, I had to do this mustang joke )
