Eletronic Music

Discussion in 'General Off-Topic' started by Sh3lbYe, Mar 17, 2014.

  1. Sh3lbYe

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    Hi guys, i recently have working on making music, eletronix music to be more especific, so i made a lot of unfinished songs, but this one is the most complete i ever made, so i came to showing this on the foruns to ask you guys one thing, and that thing is telling me what do you think about the music what could i can do to do it better, i dont want you guys to share or like and that shit, just tell me if i got future on music, and telling me constructive criticism, thanks.

    https://soundcloud.com/diogo-silva-200/id
     
  2. NkosiKarbul

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    Not bad at all! I miss some hard basses, but i guess thats a personal preference and so obviously up to you to decide. :p
    Keep on making music, if that was your first track, im sure you can achieve great sounds!

    To offer some constructive criticism, the employment of the singe samples sound a little box like... i have no real knowledge about making music so it is hard to describe for me.
    I used to play around with E-jay when i was young and i know it is/was no real tool to make music, but maybe i can explain what i mean by refering to it. In E-jay you had to place samples from a library to the timeline and you had multiple audio channels to place them. The way how some of the.. synth effects i think.. are kicking in sounds rather abrupt and as those samples would not have a very well blending beginning. That way i get the impression to hear when a new samples block in the timeline starts, even when i dont know how you created this. That is just the feeling it creates.

    Maybe try to mix/blend the start of strong sounds that build a contrast to the background with something introducing, or blending. Not that it should affect realy what you hear, but how you hear it.
    Much confuse, i know, and then again, i have no idea how you make music. But i love to listen to electric music and berlin has quite good stuff. :p
     
  3. Sh3lbYe

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    i have made everything except the sounds... i use flstudio, not my first one, but not too far, i started trying to make music 3 mounths ago...
     
  4. NkosiKarbul

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    Looks overhelming complex. Would love to learn it but have no time beside learning 3d modeling and such. Why do we have to sleep?! Gotta learn polyphasic sleep i guess, "uberman" pattern ftw! :p

    Maybe you can resynth some of the samples with it or have some blending effects between them and/or silence. I would wonder if not.
     
  5. Narwhal

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    thats a really cool song! great job
     
  6. Kryotex

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    cool! i thought i'm only one that making music here, but it seems that there's now 2 of us ))))
     
  7. NkosiKarbul

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    Gabester makes some nice music too. :p
    https://soundcloud.com/gabester
     
  8. your local emo

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    Sounds nice!

    It's been a while since I've been able to make anything (over 3 1/2 years now)...I had a long adventure moving from florida to belize...then to washington....and soon to be back to florida, lol...all that to say....ALL of my equipment was left behind when I left belize, my old rig, keyboard, stereo system, tv, monitor....everything...the only thing I retrieved was my ps3 +games and my old rig's harddrives (thankfully!)

    I only recently built my newest rig just this past november, so I have yet to replace my keyboard, but I so desperately want to get back into making music, I miss it so much, and there's really nothing else out there (that I've heard yet) that sounds like my stuff...for better or worse.

    I would make a soundcloud....except none of my ableton stuff is finished, I only have like 1 track that I made with acid 2.0 that I guess can be called "finished".....but it's not really original since it's a just bunch of pre-recorded loops chopped and blended into a track >.>
     
  9. Kryotex

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    You know, my first tracks was same like methods :)
     
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