Hey here is a video that I have worked on in the past few days. I would love your criticism!

Discussion in 'Videos, Screenshots and other Artwork' started by polonuim210, Oct 13, 2015.

  1. polonuim210

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  2. NistingurA

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    Very nice video dude :thumb up: :) Only tipp: Place the camera not just in the air so it floats. Place it on walls or on the ground ;)
     
  3. clayton8or

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    Why... Cameras are floating all the time irl, helicopters, drones, etc. Also if you watched one of my beam vids you would see i even follow the car with the camera giving a neat chasing effect... all depends on your style of video making.
     
  4. HockeySnipe16

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    Very nice! I am not easily pleased by the montages posted on the forums but yours is really good! I do have some tips though:

    1. Please don't do that blinking effect anymore. It is actually quite distracting from the video itself. It also makes my eyes kinda trip out. It is nice that they are in sync with the music, but I still think they are rather distracting.

    2. I personally was not a fan of the music at all. It was a little too classical. I don't think that type of music really fits a BeamNG montage. I personally like electronic. It is what most people use so it would probably be your best bet. There are a few places you can go to such as FreeSongsToUse or NoCopyrightSounds. These two channels have the best choice of music IN MY OPINION. As long as you don't choose that dubstep crap, you will be good to go! :)

    3. It was a bit slow going to me. I personally though that the crashes themselves were kind of slow. Maybe it had to do with the music as well, but it still needs to be fixed.

    Please keep in mind that this feedback is completely based on my own opinion. I am not everyone and everyone is not me so there will be separate opinions on the video. I gave my honest opinion and hopefully you will try to fix the issues I pointed out.

    Also note that I did in fact like the video. I though it was very well made and I hope that you continue making videos. You asked for criticism and I gave it to you. I really hope you don't take offense to any of the comments I made on this video.

    I actually like the video enough to subscribe to you! As long as you fix some of the issues and post frequently, I will stay subscribed. *NOTE* By "frequently" I mean every week or two. I can, however, understand if it takes longer for you to upload because of school (unless you graduated already) and other personal matters. Keep up the great work and I really hope you continue on with montage making! :)
     
  5. polonuim210

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    Wow, I have not seen this until now, but thank you so much for the feedback! It looks like you put of a lot of time and thought into your response. I can totally see what your are saying about everything, and I will make sure to fix all the issues you pointed out and to continue making videos. It means so much to me, thank you!
     
  6. HockeySnipe16

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    I really can't wait to see what you come up with! I am glad someone has noticed how much time I put into helping other people even if I might not be the most popular montage maker. I hope to watch your videos again soon! :D
     
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