(Story) Green Ghost of Selva Rocosa

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  1. Alex_Farmer557

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    Very cool idea!
     
  2. skodakenner

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    Love the idea also very nice to read! Hope to see more soon!
     
  3. DriftinCovet1987

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    I didn't even think about that (mostly because the scene that the picture is from takes place during the daytime), but that's a good idea.

    I don't mind puns here and there as long as they are very...novel.

    Yeah, this was just something that I originally made for Web Design back in June 2017 (admittedly, the version that you're going to read isn't going to be very related to that assignment; only a few of the characters and the setting will be similar between that (worse) story and this (much better) story.


    Thanks!
     
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  4. Car8john

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    Sounds good so far
     
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  5. Ytrewq

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    Interesting idea, but "Beamaru" is cringe through the roof...
     
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  6. Car8john

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    If a 'super agree' rating existed...
     
  7. DriftinCovet1987

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    Thanks!

    To be honest, I'm not sure how I can replace it. Sure, I'd like to, but the thing is that I was looking for a one-word subtitle that would fit in well with the rest of the Green Ghost stories that I have planned. Do any of you have any suggestions for a new name for the island? (Also, this island is located in the Philippines, so I'd prefer to have either an English or Spanish name for the island.)
     
  8. General S'mores

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    Maybe Green Ghost of Acra? I can only think of US town names.
     
  9. Car8john

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    Hmmm, I dunno, go on google maps and search around?
    --- Post updated ---
    Searched up 'abandonned Philippines islands'
    Here are some
    Category:Uninhabited islands of the Philippines


    Pages in category "Uninhabited islands of the Philippines"
    The following 24 pages are in this category, out of 24 total. This list may not reflect recent changes (learn more).

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    Some are stuff like sandbars, so just check em out before you name your island after one, if you do
     
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  10. DriftinCovet1987

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    Right, I'll keep this list in mind if I need to mention other abandoned islands in the Philippines. However, thanks to @YellowRusty, the island (and the story's subtitle) will be "Selva Rocosa", or "rocky jungle" in Spanish. Unfortunately, that change (and the second teaser screenshot for Chapter 1) won't be coming in until tomorrow because my PC's internet decided not to internet tonight.
     
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  11. DriftinCovet1987

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    Here's the second teaser for the first chapter of Selva Rocosa.

    screenshot_00107.png
     
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  12. Car8john

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    how could a pigeon look so evil?

    Also, will this be like a book with pictures, a movie, a novel? I'm confused
     
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  13. DriftinCovet1987

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    It'll be a normal novel of about 12-14 5,000-word chapters, plus the prologue. There won't be any pictures besides the one that you see for the teasers (and the story art); everything will be described with words, not pictures.

    Also, I'm glad to know that I made my main character look so sinister (even though he may not be).
     
  14. YellowRusty

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    Shhh.... don't put out spoilers for everything! :rolleyes:
     
  15. Car8john

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    Ok, nice

    Wait, the pigeon is the main character?

    I figured it was the ETK

    We don't even know what the plot is going to be besides a green ghost in the Philippines....
     
  16. DriftinCovet1987

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    (I won't. This'll be the final teaser.)

    Yep, the Pigeon is the main character.
     
  17. Car8john

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    Poor main character...
     
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  18. Randomguy12

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    When will the next chapter come out?
     
  19. YellowRusty

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    When it's ready. ;)
     
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  20. Car8john

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    HYYYYYYYYPPPPPPEEEE

    like waiting for a BeamNg update...
     
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