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Try to write a poem

Discussion in 'General Off-Topic' started by overdrive5, Dec 7, 2017.

  1. overdrive5

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    Pretty self-explanatory. I'll start.

    Roses are red
    they're also white
    my love is bliss
    your war is blight.
     
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  2. carlosjr

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    Roses are red
    The sky is blue
    I'm gay
     
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  3. maty

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    I respect it. Its normal.
     
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  4. overdrive5

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    Roses are red
    you forgot a fourth verse
    but I have no problem
    with you being diverse.
     
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  5. kaiser imnop

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    roses are red
    bugatti are blue
    and you,inertia hwere you ?
    Your beaned
     
  6. overdrive5

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    Roses are red
    Inertia got banned
    poems should rhyme
    are you not a fan?
     
  7. maty

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    rose are red
    crafting a bed
    i am not fat
    i have a hat
     
  8. overdrive5

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    Roses are red
    are you guys even trying?
    writing these poems
    is easier than flying.
     
  9. maty

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    Of course i use CRTL C
    I love it, I love it; and who shall dare
    To chide me for loving that old arm-chair?
    I’ve treasured it long as a sainted prize,
    I’ve bedew’d it with tears, and embalmed it with sighs;
    ’Tis bound by a thousand bands to my heart;
    Not a tie will break, not a link will start.
    Would ye learn the spell? a mother sat there,
    And a sacred thing is that old arm-chair.

    In childhood’s hour I linger’d near
    The hallow’d seat with list’ning ear;
    And gentle words that mother would give,
    To fit me to die and teach me to live.
    She told me shame would never betide,
    With truth for my creed and God for my guide;
    She taught me to lisp my earliest prayer,
    As I knelt beside that old arm-chair.

    I sat and watch’d her many a day,
    When her eye grew dim, and her locks were grey;
    And I almost worshipp’d her when she smil’d
    And turn’d from her Bible to bless her child.
    Years roll’d on, but the last one sped—
    My idol was shatter’d, my earth-star fled;
    I learnt how much the heart can bear,
    When I saw her die in that old arm-chair.

    ’Tis past! ’tis past! but I gaze on it now
    With quivering breath and throbbing brow:
    ’Twas there she nursed me, ’twas there she died;
    And memory flows with lava tide.
    Say it is folly, and deem me weak,
    While the scalding drops start down my cheek;
    But I love it, I love it, and cannot tear
    My soul from a mother’s old arm-chair.
     
  10. overdrive5

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    Roses are red
    ABAB
    this is how rhyming works
    can't you see?
    --- Post updated ---
    Roses are red
    a copypasta this is
    it's a nice poem
    but you still miss.
     
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  11. Re:Z_IA

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    Roses are red
    Violets are blue
    お前 は もう
    死んでいる
    (Omae wa mou
    Shindeiru)

    Hopefully I did that right. Still not very good at hiragana, and I let my phone convert some words to kanji.

    Edit: Fixed thanks to Overdrive5. :)
     
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  12. overdrive5

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    My brother (who is teaching himself kanji) says it's お前もう死んでいる

    は is apparently read as "ha", except when it's used as a topic particle, in that case it's pronounced "wa". Wa is written as わ, here lies the misunderstanding. I just translated what he told me, does it make sense?

    Roses are red
    I don't speak Japanese
    even with practise
    I wouldn't do it with ease.
     
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  13. Re:Z_IA

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    For fixing my kanji,
    Thank you so much
    I’ve been trying to learn
    But my Japanese sucks. :p
     
  14. vmlinuz

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    Roses are red,
    dat boi memes are dead.
     
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  15. overdrive5

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    Roses are red
    a good poet you are
    your verses four
    the best are so far.

    Roses are red
    wait, is that it?
    Dat boi was never
    a really huge hit.
     
  16. Joeyfuller2000

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    I turned my computer on,
    My screen turned blue.
    My data is gone,
    all thanks to you.
    Damn you Windows,
    why don't you work?
    I try system restore,
    instead another quirk.
    I guess I will try reinstalling.
    Oh how things keep falling.
    Now another one doesn't work.
    I'm tired of trying to fix every quirk.
    I'm going to use Ubuntu now.
     
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  17. kaiser imnop

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    Man its called "rimes embrassé" in french so its rhymes
     
  18. MortonX

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    Roses are red
    My car is white
    You just got banned
    But I am not
     
  19. overdrive5

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    That's nice and all but red and beaned do not rhyme, even if they end with -ed (they do on paper but not out loud).
     
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  20. kaiser imnop

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    Roses are red
    Like your red skoda
    But at least A roses is never ded
    Excepted your fabia
     
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